Twoeliz's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Problem With Dynamax]

This is what battles should be like

[Artist Blocked]

This looks great and sounds great. Call me immature but I laugh when the moon farted lol. Some other parts of the video were pretty funny as well. You know people tell you to not play ball in the house but this happens when playing outside, I think I'd take my chances inside.

[Taking Fright: 2019 Thesis Film]

This is some high quality animation in my opinion! It looked really neat and smooth for most of the video. The only time that it seemed a little off to me was when the bird run away from the mysterious creature, the shadow of it simply didn't feel like it fit there correctly. But I got to say, that mail bird was so adorable!

drawphildraw responds:

thank you so much! and i appreciate the feedback!

[Inside The Trash Tube - Short Horror Film]

I don't see a lot of things like this so I'm pleasantly surprised.

VictoransXD responds:

Thank you so much! It's one of my very first short films, will post alot of animations in the future aswell ^^

[I Love U Bby]

Yeah that potential law is quite worrisome. Anyhow smooth animation.

["Still Alive" Portal Animatic]

This wip is really detailed and looks absolutely fantastic!

[Exile, Vilify MAP part (Survivors)]

This is pretty nice, walk cycles for 4 legged creatures can be quite difficult but I think this is nicely done.

[An Untidy Catcher's Mitt]

I'm going to be honest, I have no idea what is going on here. All I know is that is weird, looks nasty and that it has great quality.

[Seven Guidances to Wishful Safety Episode 1]

I think that so far it seems to rely too much on dialogue and it makes it quite boring. For example when one of the characters was talking about that bakery an shot of how the bakery looked and the things that were within it would have been nice or even showing other failing bakeries would have been good just to show how severe the monopoly was. But for a very simple modification I would suggest the mouths moving or even having a more extensive facial expressions.

GissyEva responds:

I can get the criticism! And hey maybe I'll thinking about that in for future projects! ^^

That said, I will have to apologize in advance because the episodes were already made long before I made my Newgrounds account. ^^; So, just a bit of a head up.

[Marianne and Hilda Secret C Support Conversation]

Love the ending, that's totally how to play uno. Flipping tables, such great memories!