Aw this was so fun to read. Looks like they are still looking for their home dimension and this one was close. I like to think that in that section when Horald asks where the snow is at, that suddenly a bunch of snow fell on him out of nowhere, probably from a large tree or something. I was wondering if the seasons in this dimension really go crazy like 1 minute is winter and the next is spring. I thought that only a sudden change could make her fall in the mud like that looking her balance or something but hey at least there was a nice lake to take a dip in! but speaking about the crazy weather how long did she waited for her brother to come out of the ground? I couldn't imagine waiting 3 months for someone haha I hope that the weather was truly crazy, and it was just a few hours or a day. I do like the extra details you added to the background. It really makes the viewing experience much more enjoyable!