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I'm going to be honest, I have no idea what is going on here. All I know is that is weird, looks nasty and that it has great quality.

I think that so far it seems to rely too much on dialogue and it makes it quite boring. For example when one of the characters was talking about that bakery an shot of how the bakery looked and the things that were within it would have been nice or even showing other failing bakeries would have been good just to show how severe the monopoly was. But for a very simple modification I would suggest the mouths moving or even having a more extensive facial expressions.

GissyEva responds:

I can get the criticism! And hey maybe I'll thinking about that in for future projects! ^^

That said, I will have to apologize in advance because the episodes were already made long before I made my Newgrounds account. ^^; So, just a bit of a head up.

Love the ending, that's totally how to play uno. Flipping tables, such great memories!

It was only two dollars! Imma just gonna pay one.

MrLunger responds:

wow people actually watched this hehe!

Those are a lot of steps to animate. This shows how much time it takes to perfectionate the art of animation.

Kirby! How could you?! You can say the F word all you want but how dare you have such disturbing hand???

I am pretty impressed with this animation! But then again I don't usually get to see animations made with paper and pencil. I believe that the way you use smudges really help the creepiness pop out! Plus the music was great at making me feel a little uneasy.

AmericanGutter responds:

hey thanks for watching, i'm glad you liked it!

Voice acting and the animation isn't the best quality but it did keep me entertained with the plot .

We all gotta start somehow! I'm also reposting things here that I have on YouTube. Anyhow, the art is really nice and the animation is quite smooth but it is a little repetitive. :3

I would like to make an animated series, however I'm broke so it will mostly not have any voice acting but luckily I have an audio guy to help me bring my animations to life ! I'm open to criticism. Do not hold back your words.

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