Twoeliz's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Liver Resection]

8 months of work? Wow! I'm also working on a project that I estimated around 6 - 8 months of work to be completed. At least I'm not the only one with a crazy lengthy project.

The backgrounds impressed me, I thought that it looked really good, but then I saw the characters and it was a little bit of a let down. They are not awful , I guess I was just expecting something different. Their designs reminds me of older cartoons like Dexter's laboratory but maybe that's just the glasses haha. The animation could be better, it just looks somewhat awkward but the funny expressions and visual comedy almost make up for it. I like the voice acting, even though that it took me longer than it should have to realize that Adelia was a woman. I just thought she was a guy with an odd name and moobs lol but I guess that was just part of the comedy.

[Oh wow]

Yep that is the appropriate reaction to have lmao

[theboi12901 anime E1]

Alright, this is obviously not good quality. I watched some of your older things to see what you are trying to go for. I think you might be wanting to do random humor with unpleasant animation but you are trying to be better.

The audio is horrible, sure ear rape can be funny but is important not to over use it.
The animation stuff is a little tricky, even if you want it to not be great ,having stiff animation is not the way. The characters don't look interesting, they look avarage, if you are trying to make funny videos you might need to experiment with art styles. You could make them simplistic or have some weird details for visual comedy but the most important part would be making them have an expressive face.

[Pedro and the Door 2]

This is very well done, however most of the sound effects made the experience of watching this less enjoyable.There are some that fit pretty well and others that are just not quite there. I was not a fan of how the car sounded but I did like the sounds that played when the character was looking at multiple doors.

There are some really cool shots in this video with plenty of interesting looking scenes. I struggle with deciding if I should rate this a 3 or 3.5 because is somewhat boring but there are also fun parts. It looks like there were lots of effort put into this and that you just work with what you had and somehow made it sound not awful. That was some pretty impressive work.

[PowerUps]

" BUT IT'S ROTTEN!! "

[Tumor]

Incredibly disturbing. I just don' know what to say about this other than this is trying to give me a crawling sensation under my skin.

[The Battle of Big Penny | (OneyPlays Music Video)]

I am not sure what to say about this. I just really like it.
There are just so many weird things in this video , I was so amazed by what is going on in the animation that it took me longer than it should have to realize that the song was about pennies lol

[The Colored Creek - episode 1 [animated web series]]

There are many things that could be improved here. The animation can be quite stiff ,the backgrounds could use some clean up and perhaps the characters could blink more because that might make them look more alive. However there are also things done right. The color palette is absolutely outstanding and the characters have a pretty good design but their proportions can sometimes be weird. I admire the camera shots that were in this ,specially the one where the character goes to bed. The perspective was very cool looking even though that I could be implemented better.

TheColoredCreek responds:

Thanks for the feedback

[Goku's Hidden Technique [DRAGON BALL Parody]]

How could Carrot fight dirty like that? He deserved to get hit by that pebble!

[torture dance reanimated (still unfinished)]

I'd say finish this. It looks really weird looking, smooth and interesting! I bet it would do a very nice animation if you keep on animating it. In fact the parts that are finish look pretty good on their own. I would score this much much higher if most looked finished. The zooming in the boat part was quite impressive actually.

sans50skelebro responds:

glad to hear your thought!
i made it purpously to be goofy