Twoeliz's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Transformation!(Test)]

I'm sure you can do better. Try drawing some more so the animation can have more frames and be smoother. The character design is not ugly and the wings looked quite nice as well but the stiffness of it just ruins it. In a transformation sequence such as this there needs to be movement. You can make the hair and dress flow in the wind ,slowly changing colors or flashing to reveal the final results. I guess that is fine that the wings just kinda appeared but the impact would be much greater if they came out of her body and her body language showed that there are some changes occurring. Keep on animating! You will surely improve.

AnimationsOfArt responds:

Thank you for the critique!!:D I didn't put much effort into this one but I will remake this in the future with your advice!!Have an amazing day!!:)

[Reel]

Looks like you got some nice animation practice. My favorite is the bouncy thing in the end but the first guy walking is the most impressive!

DAyala666 responds:

thanks you, i really enjoyed animating that Lobo walking. glad you liked it .

[X-RL7 - Kindred (Lyric Video)]

When I saw one of your videos for the first time I remember being amazed and I hoped that it would get daily first. It didn't but seeing this being featured, even if in 4th place makes me really happy.

X-RL7 responds:

Y'know I didn't even know this video got 4th place until reading your comment! Thank you for the support and kind words, it's much appreciated - you are awesome :)

[Bleating Heart - Animated Series Teaser Trailer]

I want to see more of this!
But this "soon"...is it soon as in a year or 2 or sooner ??

vanamation responds:

Thanks so much, I'm glad to hear it! "Soon" as in, as soon as possible, haha! (Hopefully within a year... fingers crossed!)

[The Colored Creek - episode 1 [animated web series]]

There are many things that could be improved here. The animation can be quite stiff ,the backgrounds could use some clean up and perhaps the characters could blink more because that might make them look more alive. However there are also things done right. The color palette is absolutely outstanding and the characters have a pretty good design but their proportions can sometimes be weird. I admire the camera shots that were in this ,specially the one where the character goes to bed. The perspective was very cool looking even though that I could be implemented better.

TheColoredCreek responds:

Thanks for the feedback

[torture dance reanimated (still unfinished)]

I'd say finish this. It looks really weird looking, smooth and interesting! I bet it would do a very nice animation if you keep on animating it. In fact the parts that are finish look pretty good on their own. I would score this much much higher if most looked finished. The zooming in the boat part was quite impressive actually.

sans50skelebro responds:

glad to hear your thought!
i made it purpously to be goofy

[Down & Under - "Heat of the moment"]

Only joking? I don't believe him, that's what they say when they don't get their way!
Lmao his simple reaction on realizing that it was a joke was simply quite funny to me.

YahBudz responds:

haha thanks! From experience I've had too many people jokingly ask us to "come and do mine when you're done" and figured at some point someone may just take that seriously and react this way lol.

[Gwent Time]

Oh lord their expressions are so hilarious but poor thing, he created a crater on it. Who's gonna pay for that??? Well the employees don't care, they don't get paid enough to deal with that stuff. They rather play some random game with a costumer.

Dan responds:

if the cashier wins he can use the money to replace the counter lmao

[Bridging Problems (A Paper Mario Animation)]

Hey the texture and camera movements look pretty good!

E-ManAnimates responds:

I'm glad you like them! Is there anything that needs improvement, though?