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[For the Love of Lemons and Limes | Stop Motion Claymation]

Where did the lemon go? How did the lime just appeared? This movie has me in awe. The sound design is pretty good and so is the animation.

ClayDay responds:

Thanks!

[Index man]

The change of backgrounds goes very well with the beat but you clearly knew what you were doing. Since the paper isn't exactly in the center most of the time , it gives the viewer the opportunity to admire the background well so that was a pretty good choice. However, even though the paper slides smoothly across the screen I'm not sure what to think of it. I'm not sure if it is a distraction or a way to keep the viewers attention by not being repetitive.

When it comes to the animation, it is pretty neat actually. Sure it is pretty random and I doubt it follows a story or have any deeper meaning but that doesn't make it bad. In fact it can be quite fun seeing this sort of animation because it is almost impossible to predict what is going to happen next. I was surely not expecting the key to act as a light switch at all! I wouldn't change much about your creation but the score could have been higher if it was colored as animation without color can often look unfinished.

charkles responds:

This may be the best criticism ive gotten ever! You summarized it so clearly and I couldn't agree more. Im not confident enough with coloring to do that with the fear of messing up and its paper animation which means no ctrl z but thanks so kuch for the criticism I will definitely take this into account!

[BANANAS IN PYJAMAS! (Animated Parody)]

The weird part is that I don't remember ever watching Bananas in pajamas BUT I do remember the theme song very well. I may not know what the show was about but I am just gonna pretend that the show was about a banana who wanted to build a family with a bear and failed miserably.

SteakstixAnimations responds:

I don’t remember what it was about, either. But I’m going to absolutely believe that it was about that haha

[A Transformation!(Test)]

I'm sure you can do better. Try drawing some more so the animation can have more frames and be smoother. The character design is not ugly and the wings looked quite nice as well but the stiffness of it just ruins it. In a transformation sequence such as this there needs to be movement. You can make the hair and dress flow in the wind ,slowly changing colors or flashing to reveal the final results. I guess that is fine that the wings just kinda appeared but the impact would be much greater if they came out of her body and her body language showed that there are some changes occurring. Keep on animating! You will surely improve.

AnimationsOfArt responds:

Thank you for the critique!!:D I didn't put much effort into this one but I will remake this in the future with your advice!!Have an amazing day!!:)

[Reel]

Looks like you got some nice animation practice. My favorite is the bouncy thing in the end but the first guy walking is the most impressive!

DAyala666 responds:

thanks you, i really enjoyed animating that Lobo walking. glad you liked it .

[X-RL7 - Kindred (Lyric Video)]

When I saw one of your videos for the first time I remember being amazed and I hoped that it would get daily first. It didn't but seeing this being featured, even if in 4th place makes me really happy.

X-RL7 responds:

Y'know I didn't even know this video got 4th place until reading your comment! Thank you for the support and kind words, it's much appreciated - you are awesome :)

[Bleating Heart - Animated Series Teaser Trailer]

I want to see more of this!
But this "soon"...is it soon as in a year or 2 or sooner ??

vanamation responds:

Thanks so much, I'm glad to hear it! "Soon" as in, as soon as possible, haha! (Hopefully within a year... fingers crossed!)

[The Colored Creek - episode 1 [animated web series]]

There are many things that could be improved here. The animation can be quite stiff ,the backgrounds could use some clean up and perhaps the characters could blink more because that might make them look more alive. However there are also things done right. The color palette is absolutely outstanding and the characters have a pretty good design but their proportions can sometimes be weird. I admire the camera shots that were in this ,specially the one where the character goes to bed. The perspective was very cool looking even though that I could be implemented better.

TheColoredCreek responds:

Thanks for the feedback

[torture dance reanimated (still unfinished)]

I'd say finish this. It looks really weird looking, smooth and interesting! I bet it would do a very nice animation if you keep on animating it. In fact the parts that are finish look pretty good on their own. I would score this much much higher if most looked finished. The zooming in the boat part was quite impressive actually.

sans50skelebro responds:

glad to hear your thought!
i made it purpously to be goofy