Twoeliz's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ep 1 | A Gift]

Newgrounds seems like excellent place to share your original creations because criticism is encouraged here. It seems that in other places people are more hesitant to give out an opinion that isn't extremely positive. I encourage you to keep doing episodes but let me tell you this ,to me this doesn't feel like an episode. Perhaps is the lack of noises or the lack of background. Perhaps I do not understand the animation but to me it doesn't seem like there is a clear sense of direction. If you are willing to, perhaps you can tell me what are these episodes about?

Atastic responds:

Yeah, i've been posting these on Twitter for a while now. It kinda started out as a side thing i did for a person i was looking up for, but it turned out later i would put more love and care into the series, hence why there are no sound or background atm.

The series started abit on to be a slice of life thing, where The Knight or The Doctor would just do wholesome stuff. Later finding out it needed more time to become something more than that. Needed more adventures more sound, more movement, more story, etc.

So in the end, the most healthy way to a series to grow and gain a audience is to post it where other people will see it. So thats why i posted on Newgrounds.

[Mutual Friend]

Aw this was just so adorable! Lovely pixel art cute simple story. I don't usually see pixel animations and when I do they are usually not a cute but either way I understood that the first dog wanted to play with a soccer ball but I was never able to figure out what the second one wanted to play with. It looks like in the end they fused their ideas and it turned into some sort of racket but they didn't seem to pay in the end. I wonder if the dogs will play tomorrow due to being tired of searching for a friend all day long.

brenetcomics responds:

Thanks!!!! She wants to play tennis, so with a soccer ball combining it with a tennis racket, they could play together!

[Ticking Animation Meme]

It is a little weird that he had to shoot the deer to get into its body I mean the deer should still be injured after the shot unless death healed the wound so that the guy would have a body to be in. It is an interesting concept but I wouldn't call it reincarnation because I would think that for that to happen he must be reincarnated within a newborn. Now that I think about it maybe it would have been an interesting idea if he had to kill a soon to be mother doe to speed up the birthing progress and he could reincarnate within the body of a new born deer facing the challenge of running from death still as he would have no protection from a mother.

But enough with my random thoughts. I do like the animation even though that it looks kinda minimal because it works with the concept of death. After all there is barely any energy left to keep on moving or getting usted to a new body. I have to say that you were able to capture the beauty of a deer really well!

AGreenSquidKid responds:

Thank you for the feedback! :D

[Watching You Watching Me]

I was honestly expecting some guy simply staring back at me. I'm so glad there was so much more than that !

sketchbig responds:

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review!

[Problem Pig]

Problem pig tried to eat this man's testicles. That's pretty gay man

Glenn-Draper responds:

Yeah I guess you’re right.

[When owning a snake goes wrong]

This was hilarious. Luci is indeed the best of pets.

Thesmashdoctor responds:

yaaay!! thanks you she is wonderful <3

[When you have to break out of jail]

"That doesn't look like fire but it says fire so I'm gonna use it"
The important thing is that it was useful for breaking out lol

Thesmashdoctor responds:

haha so true :D

[The Meaning of What episode 1: Demons, Rootbeer, Boomers]

The animation is decent and the voice acting is quite alright so this video keep me very well entertained however I do not appreciate that our heroes did not get that ice cream that was offered to them. I do love the part with the poor skeleton though I simply didn't see that coming!

NewRenaissance responds:

Thanks, hopefully they get their ice cream when go they go to get their payment. I'm glad you enjoyed the animation and voice acting, we hope to make those parts of the next episode even better!

[The Problem with Cosplay]

I was expecting this to be a poorly animated story about some guy who accidentally turned into a magic girl but I guess this is fine as well

SpicyRaider responds:

Glad you liked it :D Or had some weird feeling between disgust and confusion, that works too xD

[Sniper Shot Short]

Such clean animation and beautiful background.

goeliath2 responds:

lol the backgrounds were slapped together using a combination of photoshopping, mixing images, and me drawing over them so that the original images aren't prominent. I actually originally made and planned this with no background, but it looked like shit so I quickly slapped some together.
Thanks for the compliment though!