I don't know how likely it is to maintain viewers attention on a video this long On NG but I didn't want such lengthy video to not be watched, I mean with something this long there was probably a lot of effort put into it and that needs some sort of recognition. Not gonna lie I wasn't focusing all of my attention in this video but there are some things that popped out... radioactive condom? Male pregnancy? He died giving birth? And all of this happened because someone send a letter saying go fuck yourself and put a condom on it?? I'm not entirely sure if that was meant to be funny but it sure gave me a chuckle.
There where some copyrighted songs there and it did surprise me.If you are doing your own thing then it would probably be best if you avoided songs like those. If you are capable of doing your own music or able to purchase some that would be preferable. Something else, you had both real people and cartoons on this. I don't see a lot of that here and that's not necessarily a good or bad thing, I just wasn't very sure what it was trying to convey with that choice. Either way, it was mostly an okay narration. I enjoy listening to it, in fact it sounded like the type of thing that I tend to listen to on YouTube while I'm doing other things.