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The animation is decent and the voice acting is quite alright so this video keep me very well entertained however I do not appreciate that our heroes did not get that ice cream that was offered to them. I do love the part with the poor skeleton though I simply didn't see that coming!

NewRenaissance responds:

Thanks, hopefully they get their ice cream when go they go to get their payment. I'm glad you enjoyed the animation and voice acting, we hope to make those parts of the next episode even better!

I was expecting this to be a poorly animated story about some guy who accidentally turned into a magic girl but I guess this is fine as well

SpicyRaider responds:

Glad you liked it :D Or had some weird feeling between disgust and confusion, that works too xD

Such clean animation and beautiful background.

goeliath2 responds:

lol the backgrounds were slapped together using a combination of photoshopping, mixing images, and me drawing over them so that the original images aren't prominent. I actually originally made and planned this with no background, but it looked like shit so I quickly slapped some together.
Thanks for the compliment though!

This is some high quality animation in my opinion! It looked really neat and smooth for most of the video. The only time that it seemed a little off to me was when the bird run away from the mysterious creature, the shadow of it simply didn't feel like it fit there correctly. But I got to say, that mail bird was so adorable!

drawphildraw responds:

thank you so much! and i appreciate the feedback!

I don't see a lot of things like this so I'm pleasantly surprised.

VictoransXD responds:

Thank you so much! It's one of my very first short films, will post alot of animations in the future aswell ^^

I think that so far it seems to rely too much on dialogue and it makes it quite boring. For example when one of the characters was talking about that bakery an shot of how the bakery looked and the things that were within it would have been nice or even showing other failing bakeries would have been good just to show how severe the monopoly was. But for a very simple modification I would suggest the mouths moving or even having a more extensive facial expressions.

GissyEva responds:

I can get the criticism! And hey maybe I'll thinking about that in for future projects! ^^

That said, I will have to apologize in advance because the episodes were already made long before I made my Newgrounds account. ^^; So, just a bit of a head up.

It was only two dollars! Imma just gonna pay one.

MrLunger responds:

wow people actually watched this hehe!

I am pretty impressed with this animation! But then again I don't usually get to see animations made with paper and pencil. I believe that the way you use smudges really help the creepiness pop out! Plus the music was great at making me feel a little uneasy.

AmericanGutter responds:

hey thanks for watching, i'm glad you liked it!

I would like to make an animated series, however I'm broke so it will mostly not have any voice acting but luckily I have an audio guy to help me bring my animations to life ! I'm open to criticism. Do not hold back your words.

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